My Learning goals 2017

This is about Tom Trueheart hope you enjoy

My name Is Tom Trueheart. I am on a mission to save my six brothers but there was a problem. I was as small as a thumb. I went to go save my brothers they were In a tree castle. I needed some rest for the day. My brothers would probably be hungry by now I think they will be thirsty too. So I set off to find my brothers I felt heroic and glorious. I was hungry then I found a berry tree.

I slashed off a berry with my sword I had to be careful to not cut myself I was lucky I was experienced. I found another man that was the size as a thumb. He gave me some water he help me save my brothers I felt stunned and cold I was unstable then I fainted. Then when I got up I felt pounded then I found a stock supply of water and food thew the bushes then I was thirsty so I drank some water out of the jar it was clean water and the food was clean too.

Then the man who trapped my brothers appeared. I was following him but suddenly he went through the bushes and he was gone then I was looking around for him but then I found his tree castle. My brothers were in tied in a rope going down into a toxic bath. I tried to hurry up and find the key for the door but then I just slashed it down. I ran to my brothers but when I got them out of the rope they disappeared though my hands. They were clones.

It was a trap the person who traped my brothers went away but I must rescue my brothers. Then I slashed my way through the wall. I ran after him, I found his tree castle I smashed through the door. I ran up to my brothers and saved them. Then we lived at the tree castle some things needed fixing though i cut some wood off some trees to fix the castle then we lived in harmony. The end